I received many different comments from the critique in class. The critique was useful to me because each comment was different.
Below are the comments which received –
- the items used in the poster are very abstracted, they are not very clear. -> This is true because I used different effects in image trace.
- The earrings are not clear. I personally know that it is an earring but i the critique it was not clear to the audience.
- there are lots of refines
- The text on the top left corner which includes the quote should be changed.
- justify the text – change the typeface for both arabic and english
- define the images
- refine the fork more – because it was not clear that its a fork – I used this fork because it looks like plastic fork, I also used a layer of foil to cover half of the fork to match the quote.
- I have to add more colors to my poster.
- The earrings are not blending with the fork compositionally
- focus more on the fork maybe change it.
These comments were useful to me. I will try my best to change what i think should be changed. I like some parts very much. but the comments show that the message which i wanted to create was not clear. therefor, I will try my best and fix the parts which are not working. I will also try to take other people opinions in the next stages.